Learning and Teaching – Literacy
Term 4 Literacy assessments
Over the past few weeks, children have been engaging in a range of literacy assessments to support both accurate reporting and thoughtful planning. These include PAT-Reading, DIBELS screeners, and our ongoing InitiaLit screening and cumulative assessments. Together, these tools give teachers a clear picture of each child’s progress and achievement and help us make informed decisions about next steps in learning.
Teachers have also spent time meeting to review and moderate students’ writing pieces. During this process, they compare samples against the Victorian English Curriculum to ensure progression points are allocated consistently and accurately. This collaborative approach helps us maintain fairness across the school and ensures families receive clear, reliable information about their child’s learning.
These assessments form an important part of our end-of-year summative assessment process. They give us a comprehensive snapshot of each child’s learning and growth across the year and feed directly into their end-of-year reports. This helps ensure families receive an accurate, genuine reflection of each child’s achievement as we celebrate their progress and look ahead to their next steps in learning.
Boosting comprehension through retelling
One of the most powerful ways to build comprehension is through retelling. Retelling helps children recall key details, organise their thinking, and strengthen their overall understanding of a story. It’s also something that can be easily supported at home.
Tips for retelling at home
Read together: Take turns reading or read aloud to your child.
Pause and discuss: Stop at key points to talk about what’s happening in the story.
Use your own words: Encourage your child to explain the story without looking at the book.
Focus on key elements: Characters, setting, problem, events, and solution.
Questions to ask
Who are the main characters?
Where does the story take place?
What problem or challenge do the characters face?
What happened first, next, and last?
How do the characters solve the problem?
What part of the story did you like best and why? Can you make a connection to something in your own life?
Fun idea: Have your child draw a story map or create a comic strip to show the main events.
Retelling at home strengthens comprehension and helps your child become a confident, thoughtful reader.
Creative Corner – Persuasive writing
This week’s optional Creative Corner task invites students to explore persuasive writing. A persuasive text tries to convince the reader to agree with a point of view.
Persuasive texts usually follow this structure:
Introduction – say what you think
Start by clearly telling the reader your opinion. For example, “I think families should have a screen-free evening once a week.” Make it clear from the beginning what your side is.
Reasons in paragraphs – explain why
Give 2 to 3 strong reasons to support your opinion. Each reason should go in its own paragraph. Try to elaborate by adding examples or details so the reader understands why you think it’s a good idea. For example, ‘Screen-free evenings help families spend time together playing games or reading, which makes everyone happy.’
Conclusion – say it again
Finish by repeating your opinion and reminding the reader of your main reasons. This helps your argument feel strong and complete. For example, ‘Because screen-free evenings help families have fun and spend quality time together, I think every family should try it.’
Students can use persuasive language such as strong statements I believe…, We should…, emotive words, and questions that make the reader think.
Suggestions for writing prompts
Should children get to pick the weekend activity once a month?
Should dessert be allowed before dinner sometimes?
Should pets sleep in children’s bedrooms?
Should families have a screen-free evening once a week?
How parents can help
Chat about ideas for and against each topic.
Help children organise their reasons into paragraphs.
Encourage them to give examples and explain their ideas.
Parents can support by helping children brainstorm reasons for and against the chosen topic.
Once both sides have been explored, encourage your child to choose one side and begin writing their persuasive piece using the structure above. Parents can assist by discussing ideas, helping organise reasons into paragraphs, and supporting students to elaborate on each idea with examples or explanations.
Once your child picks a point of view, they can start writing. I’m sure children will have some very creative, thoughtful, and persuasive arguments for any of these topics.
Happy writing!
Dani De Luca

























